For my very good friend...

Hey :) I would love to thank everyone for your sweet comments :D you guys are amazing! I also want to thank my one of my best friends in the world for being a good sport :) he knows who he is and he knows some of the stuff I write is about him <3 Like my last post lol :) So yep here's another poem, a happy one this time :D

For My Friend

You make my heart skip a beat

And with you no other man can compete

I blush the absolute darkest shade of red

With every touch and every word said

Whenever you are near nothing can be wrong

I think of you when I hear any love song

And I never want these feelings to cease

You give me hope and you give me peace

You are the one I count on till the end

I am incredibly proud to call you my friend

And I am aware you don't let many in

But I'm glad I have gotten under your skin

That was a shorter one but still I hope you enjoyed it :)

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This one is very important to me...

Alright I first want to thank everyone who commented and read my poems. I greatly appreciate it, it truly means a lot to me. :) Now this is a very important post for me because I am currently working on a short story for one of my best friends he knows who he is :) So yea I would like some feedback on the beginning of the story... there isn't much either. So don't expect it to be like pro status, because trust me it isn't. I just want to know what you guys think. :) K here it is......

Once upon a time… on a secluded island there was a grand kingdom that was tormented by an evil dragon. This dragon had destroyed countless towns within the kingdom and killed thousands of people. The people of the kingdom were tired of living in fear of this dragon. The king and queen of the kingdom had searched high and low looking for anyone who would try and kill the dragon and end their anguish but no person ever made themselves known. Until one day a young man arrived at the castle this young man would soon be responsible for the fate of the kingdom.
Daniel grew up in one of the most rural towns on the island, the town was mostly know for their farm lands. He was one of many field workers in the town and his entire family before him had done the same work. He believed this to be the source of what he calls his “slave strength” which is one of many gifts that makes Daniel superior in comparison to the other citizens of the kingdom. Another unique quality that Daniel possessed was that his body had regenerative powers, meaning that he healed more quickly than the average individual. Daniel when he was growing up had not always been the model child and he stole from the richest man on the island when he was only eight years old. He stole the rarest sword on the island. This sword was amazing because it was indestructible and made of the finest silver in all of the island and it was the only one of its kind. The sword was kept in the owners most secure home but all the security in the world even at such a young age couldn’t keep Daniel from getting it. No one ever suspected him and no one ever found the sword. Daniel referred to it as the mighty Larry. One thing that Daniel couldn’t hide was his faithful pet gorilla Paul. Paul was abnormally large for a gorilla and the only surviving one left on the island. Paul let Daniel ride him around as if he was his steed. The sight of the two of them struck fear into those who didn’t already know of them. That is exactly what happened when Daniel rode into the capital city on Paul with Larry in his hand.

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Another poem for you guys...

Ok so this one is a sad one but i hope you guys will still like it and eventually I'm going to put up some of my short stories so be on the look out for that :) Here we go...

All I feel is confusion

Was this all my delusion?

I must be going insane

I keep coming back for more pain

Why did you even bother with me?

Did it make you happy?

Do you now feel strong and powerful?

Well I'm glad I could at least be helpful

What do i do now that you have faded away?

Will you move on to someone new? Or will you stay the same way?

I would have done anything and everything for you

And even now after it all anything and everthing is still true

I miss before when you made me feel wanted

I thought we were good, that we had bonded

But I must have been mistaken

With you my heart you have taken

You are everywhere, I feel like I can't get away

You are in my every thought throughout my day

I would never give it up, even if I could

It's only causing me pain I won't let it go even if I should

I wanted to stay forever feeling the same

But you took it away as fast it came

It was so fast how do I even know it was real?

You are walking around as if it was nothing, no big deal

And now I am alone and restless

This sad feeling is endless

Did I ever truly mean anything to you?

Or were you just bored and looking for something to do?

I'm haunted now by a sole wish

Do i want the truth and anguish?

Or do i remain in the dark fantasy?

Where I can still feel happy

I am still hoping that you will change your mind

And that one day you will return my feelings in kind

But I know that is just unreal

And sadly that is how you make me feel

First Post! I'm Excited!!!

Wow I'm kinda nervous about this but here goes nothing. This is one of my old poems I hope you like it.

You

When I look into your eyes

It is always a surprise

How it makes me feel

It's truly surreal

I love your smile

To deny its pull would be futile

Its completely contagious

I would tell you how i feel if I was courageous

You are an amazing guy

And to you I could never lie

You are my best friend

And I will be here for you till the end

If you ever feel the way I do

That would be a dream come true

But even if that dream will never be

I will always love you, just wait and see

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